Is your current
website, sales copy, flyer, or advert not making any sales?
“Hire me, a 6-figure producing new client attraction
expert to tell you what’s wrong with it & I promise you’ll start making more money
“The best part for YOU is that I’m willing to do it all
for a tiny fraction of my normal fee”
Dear business owner,
Average content doesn’t work. It never has and never will. What
works is above average content!
But until now, the only way to get above average content is to
invest tens of thousands of dollars to get a copywriter to come up with something amazing, a
videographer, a website developer to put it all together for you at nothing less than $15,000 to
You, however, a business owner, aspiring online marketer, or even
an intermediate marketer, as much as your heart desires, just can’t afford to spend that kind of
money right off the top.
Well my friend, things are about to change for you, starting right
Hi, my name is and I have made my clients hundreds of thousands of dollars
as one of the leading trust based new client attraction experts in Australia.
I've helped business owner's double, triple and even quadruple the
response they get from the same advertising dollar.
And I've helped them save money on wasted advertising expenses
like you couldn’t imagine.
So right now you have a prime opportunity. The opportunity that
your competitors won’t get.
The opportunity to transform your business into a money-making
machine that makes you money like clockwork.
Just how will this happen you ask?
your website, video and adverts apart, line by line, from top
to bottom for a mere fraction of what I normally charge.
Let’s not kid ourselves: You’re here for a reason and that reason is
that either, your current sales copy, ad or flyer isn’t making you any money or that you want to
get more out of it than you are right now.
You simply want in in some cases really do need more
Well, the fact of the matter is you won’t attract any more clients
or make any more money than you are right now…..unless you get a professional help.
I don’t care if you wrote your own adverts, created your own
website and video yourself. I don’t care if you paid someone to write it for you. I don’t care what
the circumstances are.
The fact is if it’s not working— it’s not working.
But the good news is right now I’m making it possible for you to
have a top-of-the-line, proven, Australian recognised, and profit producing marketer to go above
and beyond the call of duty to ensure your product, service, or whatever it may be,
But before I get into that any further, let’s talk
The difference a critique can make & why YOU’VE got to have
The fact is you have less than 10 seconds to gain the attention on
visitors to your website or ad, and if you fail to do this then the chances of them sticking around
and actually buying from you has just gone down the toilet.
However, just changing your headline alone could instantly
increase your sales by 30% or more.
The problem, however, is YOU can’t do this all by yourself,
especially if writing compelling content isn’t your forte. And judging by the fact you’re still on
this site proves you could use a helping hand.
But if you’re like most people, then I know the question rolling
around in your head right now is: What’s the difference between you doing it and letting me do
I’m glad you thought of that.
It’s because “I” know the outcome and you don’t. It’s sort of like
how a dentist knows exactly how your teeth will look once your tooth has been pulled. He knows this
because he’s seen it all, he’s pulled thousands of teeth, he knows which roots to look out for and
how the nerves inside the human mouth will react to certain movements, cuts, and
Well, the same principle applies with content. I’ve been there,
seen it all and have worked with some of the most successful marketers on the planet for years, so
I know the pitfalls and what to say, what not to say, and how to say it.
You see, I have a proven 12-point copy critique system that when
applied, results in sales, which is what you want.
And at this stage in your business
- You just can’t take the “chance” that you’ll get it
- You just can’t take the “chance” on saving money—just
1 wrong word could cost you thousands in lost conversions
- You just can’t take the “chance on using the wrong colour
- You just can’t take the “chance” on poor choice of
- You just can’t take the “chance” on marketing techniques that
couldn’t sell a burger to a starving crowd
- You just can’t take the chance on sales copy where
the flow is jacked all the way up
- You just can’t take the “chance” with order pages and call to
actions that make no sense to no one except you
- You just can’t take the “chance” on fonts,
formatting, and general layouts that are all wrong for your product or
But when you get an expert to look through everything……
I’ll Show You How To TURN UP The Profits
That’s right. I’ll walk you through how to…
- Profit on the frontend
- Profit on the upsell
- Profit on the cross sell
- Profit on the backend
- Profit all the way around
Now I know that up to this point, I’ve made a lot of promises and
you know a promise is nothing if you can’t back it up, so here goes:
Now it’s your turn….
A wise man once said everything that we have in life is a direct
result of the choices that we don’t make.
The choices that we don’t make are the ones that really matter.
You never hear anybody sitting in a nursing home at 80 years old talking about the mistakes of the
things that they did do in their life.
It’s always the regrets of the things that they didn’t do that
sadden them and depress them in their old age.
Are you ready to take the next step?
If you are then let me go into depth about….
My Copy Critiques
As I mentioned earlier, I have a 12-point can’t fail system that
when you do as I say guarantees that you’ll profit.
Well, let’s have a look at exactly what these points are and what
I’ll do for you.
1. I’ll rip
your headline apart: Often times marketers, maybe even you, leave this up to their
graphic designer, who may not be familiar with direct marketing concepts. Other times, marketers
make up their own headline that lacks the punch that it needs to instantly grab the attention of
visitors to their website.
dissect your subheads: The rule of thumb is that readers should be able to scroll and scan
your headlines and sub headlines—even if they don’t read anything else on the page, they should
still know what you’re offering & be compelled enough to take action. I’ll check to see if your
copy does this.
tear your opening paragraph to pieces too: This is where you absolutely MUST connect with
the reader, letting him or her know that you totally understand where they are, how they feel, and
that you have the solution to solve their problem. Miss this and your copy is sure to
check for legit testimonials and proof elements: There’s nothing more important than
ensuring all of your proof elements add up. Buyers are extremely savvy these days, so you’ll want
to get everything you can out of your testimonials, statistics and aspects of the sales copy you
can use to give you credentials.
zero-in on your bullet points: In many cases, bullets can make a huge difference to your
success and allow you to highlight portions of your copy and provides quick hits for readers –
ultimately improving the odds prospects will continue reading your copy.
clamp down on your USP like a hawk: If you don’t have a unique selling point, then you’re
throwing money down the drain, plain and simple. The only way to reach your full potential is to be
different than everyone else out there. I’ll check to see if you have a unique twist that will
attract a feeding frenzy of buyers.
shred your offer to pieces: Often times I see many marketers struggling to make it clear
exactly what they’re offering. Needless to say that if YOU the product or service developer is
confused, then the potential buyer is too. But don’t worry, I’ll inspect your offer to see if
there’s anything out of place or unclear and tell you what you need to do to fix it.
inspect your persuasion architecture: Just like your English teacher taught you that an
essay has a certain ‘structure’ so does a sales letter.
double check your target market: This is where a lot…I mean a lot of marketers and
business owners go wrong. Targeting the wrong crowd. This can make or break your campaigns, so in
this stage, I’ll double check to ensure that you’re reaching those whom you really want to
study your order page: Your order page is a sticky area, so you don’t want anything out of
place here. Good for you that I’ve seen it all, so I know exactly what should and should not be
there. I’ll study your order page to ensure you’re all good.
dissect your call to action: If after reading your letter I don’t take the bait,
chances are that those in your market won’t either. I’ll give you several recommendations to ensure
your call to action hits emotional triggers that actually causes potential buyers to take action. A
common flaw that I’ve seen over the years is that many offers never ever ask the reader to
tear your post script from the inside-out: whether you know it or not, the P.S. is one of
the most read parts of a sales letter. However, it’s also a common area where many business owners
goof up. I’ll tear you post script up from the inside-out and check for things that you should and
should not say to avoid any possible goof-ups that can cost you a ton in sales.
I’ll do all of this for you, so you don’t have to.
But It’s not how much work a person does, it’s the results that
count, which if you’re honest with yourself, is all you’re really interested in….the end
And I know it’s one thing for “me” to tell you about the results
you’ll receive, but I know that it sounds better coming from fellow business owners and marketers
just like you, so remember my clients in the videos above?
If you misses them take a quick look here and see what they have to
Just imagine your product or service making
anywhere from 10% to 50% to 200% or 300% more sales than it does right now each and every
Just picture yourself the thriving business that
you’ve always known you could have.
Just think for a moment about how good life could
be, knowing you’re getting the most out of your offer while squeezing out every single cent that
you truly deserve…
- The trips you could take
- The new car you could buy
- The dream home that you’ve been eying
- The extra nights out treating your family to dinner
Well now you can have all of that and more…..PLUS throw in the
Your sales are virtually guaranteed to come piling
Though I have absolutely no clue as to what it is you’re selling
or offering, I’m so confident in my experience, ability, and skill that right now I’m guaranteeing
That’s right, I’m taking all of the risks away from you and
putting it on me, ensuring YOU profit.
If the recommendations I make don't boost your response rates
dramatically -- then your review is FREE!
Just show me what you did and what the results were, and if my
recommendations didn't produce for you, I'll insist that you let me refund all of your money
directly from my bank account. It’s just that simple.
time to ACT is NOW
Yes, Mark! Please have your office contact me and schedule me in to have
my sales content reviewed as soon as
possible. I want to understand exactly how to improve my sales
content and communications in the twelve
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Thanks for taking the time to read
through this message and may your sales copy begin attracting more customers.
To your success,
P.S. If you're
uncertain, don't worry...that's a good thing. Think back on everything you've done that was truly
worthwhile in your life. I'm talking about things like: asking that special someone on a date,
learning to swim, showing up for the first day of school, getting married, buying your first home,
having a child.
What do all these things have in common?
PPS: Now think about your normal daily
activities...things like: reading ... watching TV ... even attending a seminar ... I think you'll
agree that none of them are all that scary. In fact, they're probably downright
But I want you to ask yourself, "Where have these activities got
me so far?" My guess is you won't like the answer.
That's why my advice is that you follow your fear and take